Cinderella Narrative writing

 Cinderella Narrative Retelling

Once upon a time there was a married couple. They had

 a young pretty daughter. The couple lived in a beautiful house. One day the mother got very sick. Later on she sadly passed away. The daughter and dad were very sad. The Dad fell in love a second time and married a cruel woman. The woman was named Rita and she had two daughters named Drizella and Anastasia. The daughters were very vain and cruel just like her mother (and they secretly picked their noses).  The daughters said to the other sister “You will clean this house every day so it stays sparkly and spotless” they also named her Cinderella. Cinderella did what they said and every day she would spend all her time cleaning. One day the King announced a ball for his son to get married. He gave an invitation to all the girls in his Kingdom. The daughters commanded Cinderella to make them look like the prettiest girl in the world. So Cinderella did what they said. Cinderella really wanted to go to the ball so she asked her step mother if she could go, The mother said “Not until you clean the kitchen and dust all the rooms”. Cinderella cried and cried because it would take her weeks to do them all. The mice and birds saw Cinderella very sad so they helped her clean until it was nice and spotless. Cinderella said “Mother I am finished can I go to the ball now?” 

The mother laughed she said “Not if you're looking like that.”Rita looked her up and down and left. 

Cinderella was very sad that she couldn’t go to the ball. She cried and cried. The mice and birds felt very bad but they couldn't do anything about it. She ran outside and cried. Suddenly she heard the bushes shaking and then an old woman came out with a dress and a wand. She said “Hello there Cinderella, are you ok?”. Cinderella said “No because I can't go to the ball”. 

The Fairy Godmother said “Well since I am your Fairy Godmother I will transform you into a pretty princess”. So Cinderella wiped her tears away and waited for her Fairy Godmother to transform her into a princess.

The Fairy Godmother waved her magic wand. She  turned her old filthy dress into a beautiful blue dress with glass slippers. She turned the mice into horses and turned the birds into horsemen. The Fairy Godmother said “ Remember that the spell goes away at midnight so be careful”. Cinderella remembered and left the ball. When she walked inside the ballroom everybody stared and admired how beautiful Cinderella was. The Prince could not get his eyes off Cinderella. The Prince danced and danced with Cinderella until… Suddenly the clock struck midnight and Cinderella stormed out of the room but the Prince wanted her to stay. When she was running she accidentally forgot her other pair of glass slippers. The next day came by and she did what she normally does: sweeps and dusts. Then the Prince wanted to find his princess, so he grabbed Cinderella's other pair of slippers and searched the whole entire kingdom. He finally went to the last house which was Cinderella's house. He put on the slipper for the two step sisters but it didn't  fit. He put it on Rita but it still did not fit. The Prince said “Do you have any other girls in this house?”. 

Rita said “Yes but she is our house maid”. The Prince said “Guide me to her”. When the Prince saw her he placed the slipper down on the floor and she placed her foot in it and it fitted. The prince said “She is my Princess”. Cinderella moved out of the horrid house and left with Prince charming.

Then the Prince and Cinderella got married and lived happily ever after.